s_khan (Love Master): .. saw a hidden door at left side .when he touchd the door sum bat is fly away on his head with hair touch.nw the door is opnd slowly with loud shivering noise.... *
05-06-08 - 23:52:46

gyrate (True Lover): As d door opened, there was a long dark corridor with shiverin cold breeze, a step forward and there was a small shadow crawling towards him, he steps forward to see wats that, then closer n closer d shadow became smaller and d real image bigger, suddenly in d moonlight thru broken window,he saw a beast with big teeth , droolin towards him ... *
06-06-08 - 21:22:50

s_khan (Love Master): when the beast jump over his neck...he c that ths is a deep black cat. bt the cat run away..then he look his bside. *
06-06-08 - 21:28:20

shadows (Love Geek): Beside him, he saw a bed. Which was used at least 20years ago. He touched the bed, it had at least one inch dust. Spider made their nest in every single corner of the room. He saw two pillows. On one pillow he got a frame. He cleaned da front of the frame with his bare hand. It was a picture of beatiful young girl sitting on a chair in lawn. Age might nt be more than 14years. Da room was so silent like a grave. Suddenly a wind blew up frm his left through da broken window and da frame slipped.. *
01-07-08 - 20:11:59

deleted (Mariana Lover): The old beautiful but dusty frame smashed on the floor and glass shatterd with a sound so sad like a baby's cry.Suddenly the room was ful with thick smoke and night was more scary *
01-07-08 - 20:30:10