code_red (True Core Lover): u said it was a funny one-tongue- but i gez aint really it s..but twas a gud one, a novel n wc one cud get a lesson.happy.
i rate you 10.star. Fo that.happy. *
07-01-10 - 06:55:37

james4u (Mariana Guru): Dnt wry . . When in the end i will post my answer u will really laugh alot . . Promise *
07-01-10 - 06:56:58

supratim (Mariana Party Freak): i wl rate the story 9 out of 10,and i thnk it would be a little bit better if thr would be a diffrnt reas0n abt the kicking out. If i get a chance 2 change d story a little bit,i would change lyk thz<<the 2nd wife of younger brother,and few frndz of younger brother was jealous on d elder brother,so they told crapz abt d elder bro 2 d younger bro,who was already thnking 2 kick out d elder brother. So with d support of d 2nd wife and those frndz,he decided 2 kick hs elder brother out of the d0nkey *
07-01-10 - 07:44:58

supratim (Mariana Party Freak): ........business......>>then ur same story. it would be better then. :-) *
07-01-10 - 07:47:03